11.2.11


Collection 100,
Whole group crit,

After walking round analysing our peers work, we chose a couple to give feedback on...

ISSUES RAISED:

Can you rfine colours? - Consistency
How can you improve layout on product?
It needs to be more legible.
Think about grid layout of promo work, needs to be more consistent.
How can you help make sense of info in terms of audience?

ACTION TO BE TAKEN:

Consider other deliverables
Re-visit layout
Pull together layout and compostion of booklet.

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